First coil necklace - opinions please

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Here's a design I copied from the Linda Jones book (and slightly modified), with my first coils made using a screwdriver attachment ! and I have wire wrapped the rest. BTW, I forgot to centre the necklace in the first pic, but in the 2nd, its been 'sorted'!

Having spent quite a while on this, I now think the bugle bead part is a bit too long, but I'd like your honest opinions please, as usual.





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